This is a work in progress. I think it will probably be for children around the age of 4-8. I will use some of the melody from the adult version of the song, Excuse Me, but it will not be a bluegrass song. It will be uptempo, major chords. I am thinking in places where there a words like grumpy, angry, upset--there would be a very brief deviation from the uptempo/major chord to a contrast sound (if not entirely minor chords, just notes to emphasize the mood of the words). That would only be brief moments in the song, because I want it to be upbeat, and encouraging for children.
I liked how you emphasized "Please and thank you," in your song both lyrically and musically, and I will follow suit. will be keeping the children's song about 2 minutes in length and it will be an uptempo song.
