We are still working on V3, and I think I will keep the second line, but am not sure if the last night would be best if sung, "God's wondrous cosmic plan." or There's a wondrous cosmic plan. I selected the whisper line, please let me know if you think that will stand out enough. Also we talked about the structure being a little different with a bridge and three verses, I just want to confirm that this structure works and is the final version. The original song is here just as a reference, we don't have to listen to the entire song, I just am sharing it as a reminder.