SHIVERS IN THE SHADOWS (DRAFT)

Clare S. / Genre: Americana / Country Pop / Tempo: Midtempo

SHIVERS IN THE SHADOWS (DRAFT)

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This is a draft version done co-written with Raul Barba. I also have a SUNO version in an EDM style because I have a vocalist in the UK who wants to record this song. I thought about sharing that version, Dylan described it as Epic,but since you can't use AI demos in sync, I thought it best to share this version. The possible changes below are ones that Dylan suggested to the lyrics. I was open to making changes because the song was too long. In this version, the female vocalist mispronounces a few words which is another reason this is considered a draft.

Lyrics

V1 Perfection is an illusion We think belongs to someone else Becoming lost in confusion Over hurt so deeply felt V2 Soft brushes from an angel's wing Darkness fading into dawn Waiting for my heart to sing (Might remove) Telling myself to hold on (Might remove) Chorus Shivers in the shadows Makes my blood run cold Strong Northern winds blow (Dylan thought a different word than strong would be better) Growing tired growing old (might remove or change this line) Deep inside I'll find the way (Might remove) To take the less traveled path (Might remove) Idols from my yesterday Don't define who I am Shivers in the shadows Shivers in the shadows Bridge Behind the darkest clouds The sun takes away the doubt V3. As soft as a warm summer breeze No need to hide my face in shame Losing myself in a deep freeze. (probably will rewrite this line) A number instead of a name Chorus Shivers in the shadows Makes my blood run cold Strong Northern winds blow (better adjective to describe Northern winds--might change this line entirely) Growing tired growing old (might remove or change this line) Deep inside I'll find the way (Might remove) To take the less traveled path (Might remove) Idols from my yesterday Won't write my epitaph Shivers in the shadows Shivers in the shadows