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Backstory:

                                                                                                                                                                                    I am wanting any kind of feedback but specifically:

1.Balancing images with straight talk
2.  Phrasing
3. Prosody
4. Palace of what the images communicate
5. use of diff 2nd chorus in light of this being a “list type” song
6. If images are in the best place/sequence

Lyrics:

                                                  
This Poem (bpm:110)

(c) Mitch Townley


 (v1)

Wanted to buy you a card to prove I’m romantic
But it’s not Valentines so they’re/it was harder to find
(It) didn’t need to play a song or be gigantic
Just say in less than five dollars what’s on my mind
So instead I wrote you a poem 
In this box with the heart shaped bow
Been waiting for you to finally get home

(ch1)

Little things I  Love About  You
written by you know who 

How you keep the only piece left of your binky blanket
Tucked inside your pillow case
Say candy is a food group, you have an extra sweet tooth
**Say nature/junk food doesn’t like you, have an extra sweet tooth 
Never miss a Vet’rans Day parade
Always call your dad on Saturdays
And like this poem I wrote for you

(v2)

I know the title don’t put a scare in Hallmark
But at least the first line isn’t Roses Are Red
Don’t  judge me for sometimes mixing tenses
When sittin’ next you during English as my defense
Should’ve quit rewriting it
Way before version number 6
Always gonna be some I’m adding to the list

(2nd chorus)

Little things I love ‘bout you…. (diff melody than 1st chorus)

How you wear your grandmas apron
Whenever your making
Her blue ribbon apple pie      **Her blue ribbon winnin’  pie
Make me laugh till it hurts
Think funner is a fun word,
For a scrabble rematch night 
The diff’rent beautiful your get
Holding your cousin’s baby to your chest
And like this poem I wrote for you

Bridge:
It’s not store bought sweet talk
But straight to you from my heart
Lines I tried to rhyme…
(Last chorus)

Little things I  Love About  You… (same melody as 1st chorus)

How you keep the only piece left of your binky blanket
Tucked inside your pillow case
Say candy is a food group, you have an extra sweet tooth 
Never miss a Vet’rans Day parade
Always call your dad on Saturdays
And love this poem I wrote for you
this poem I wrote for you 
Glad I wrote this poem 







****Old lyric but has the chords



 (v1)
Yes I  (G) I realize (C ) Valentines ends at (D7) midnight
The (G) card rack looked like (Am) 10 pm black(D)Friday
But (G) seven things.. I love (C ) about you (D7) Grandpa
Isn’t (G) really (Am) what I wanted to (D) say
Had some (Em) time before you got (G) home (C) to write out a (G)poem
(C ) Sorry bout using the (Am) phone bill (D7)envelope

(Ch)
(Em ) Little things I (C) Love About (G ) You
(Em ) Proudly written (C) by you know (D ) who
The (Am) way you call (C ) Binkie that ( Em) pink blanket on (C ) our sheets
(G ) Likin’ honey (C ) in your de (D) calf
How (Am ) you say you hate (C) nature could (Em) live off Now And (C ) laters
And (G) sometimes cry . (C ) trying not to (D)laugh
And (C) you’ve  only read (D) half
Of This (Em) poem I wrote for (C) you…. (G ) 

(V2)

Realize the (G) title don't (C ) put a scare  in (D7) Hallmark 
But At (G) least it doesn’t start (Am) Roses Are (D)Red
Did you (G) know there no such (C ) thing a blue (D7) Violets
If (G) you can believe what (Am) Wikipedia (D) says
And (Em) before you say a  (G) thing about this (C) stab at poe (G) try
Know (C ) 10th grade English was (Am) a train wreck for (D7) me

(Ch)

(Em ) Little things I (C) Love About (G ) You
(Em ) Proudly written by (C) you know (D ) who
The (Am) way you like(C ) tractors and ( Em) happy ever (C )afters 
And (G ) order me a (C ) Lemomdrop at the (D) bar
But  (Am ) what your not  (C) seein’ (Em) is the things I’m (C ) keeping
(G) Kissing good (C ) bye to buying (D)cards
Part(C) two should’t be as(D7) hard
For this (Em) poem I wrote for (G) you…. 

(br)

it’s not (C) store bought, (G) sweet talk (C) 4 dollars (G) in stock  
But (Em) 12 and third lines (G)of
What (Am) I haven’t said e(D7)nough


(Ch)

(Em ) Little things I (C) Love About (D ) You

The (Am) way you call (C ) Binkie that ( Em) pink blanket on (C ) our sheets
(G ) Likin’ honey (C ) in your de (D) calf
How (Am ) you say you hate (C) nature could (Em) live off Now And (C ) laters
Good (G) thing I bought (C you a (D7) bag
For This (Em) poem I wrote for (C) you…. (G ) 
This (Em) poem I wrote for (C) you (G )
This (Em) poem I wrote for (C) you…. (G )