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Backstory:

My first four way co-write.
This version is a remaster of the original done by a friend of mine                                                                                    

Lyrics:

                                                  
WRITE THIS RIGHT 
By HappyRon, Rita Weyls, Paul Demarco, Deema Homsi 

EDIT: 2 November 2022 / 9 Nov./16 Nov/7 Dec/ Jan 25/ Feb 2

FINAL  Edit : 7 Feb 2023

V1
I was good as a one girl/man band 
Now I’m better with my other half
I remember our first slow dance 
You helped me color my story 
Took away the lonely
Turned the page at last 

PC1
I’ve been playing my love songs year after year
Now they feel so real and alive with you here 

CH
We gotta write this right
Singing our songs through time
Melody, words and rhyme
Sweet harmony in every line
Yeah we gotta write this right

V2: duet version:Her
Friday night from the corner bar
Heard your hopeful sweet guitar 
Touched my soul and warmed my heart 
A dreamy vision in my world
Here to brighten up my verse 
Be my last start

V2: Solo version : Him
Friday night from the corner bar
Alone with my guitar 
You smiled and filled my heart 
A dreamy vision in my world
Here to brighten up my verse 
Be my last start

PC2: Mixed voices 
I’ve been playing my love songs year after year (him)
Now they feel so real and alive with you here (together)

CH (together)
We gotta write this right
Singing our songs through time
Melody, words and rhyme
Sweet harmony in every line
Yeah we gotta write this right

We gotta write this right
Singing our songs through time
Melody, words and rhyme
Sweet harmony in every line
Yeah we gotta write this right


POST CH
We gotta write this right
Singing sweet harmony in every line
Yeah we gotta write this right