EXCUSE ME
Clare S.
Genre: Bluegrass/Story Song
Tempo: Midtempo
Additional Notes:
No Notes Available
Backstory:
The simple words excuse me can go a long way. Lyrics & Vocals by Clare Steffen (USA), Music & Music Production by Raul Barba (Argentina). This story song is meant to be a fun way to encourage people to remember the importance of using their manners. The new version is a bit snarky and edgy/quiirky.
Lyrics:
Edited Version from a session with Dallas ( lines in parenthesis are another option)
V1
I was at the store the other day
Just looking at clothes on the rack
A grizzly growled, get out of my way
She was ready to attack
V2
With a few kind words, I'd have stepped aside
But, I was ready for a fight
I pushed her back and she couldn’t hide
I’d make her do what I thought was right
Pre-chorus
She stared at me and I stared at her
She had no manners is where it was at
Chorus
The simple words excuse me
Would have gone a long way
But now she’s gonna have to pay
(But now I’m gonna make her pay)
Next time she’ll know what to say
Please excuse me
Excuse me, please
Either would have been OK
V3
Maybe no one ever taught her
That she didn't need to be so rude
You catch more flies with honey, for sure
So, I’ll readjust her attitude
Pre-chorus
With one look she knew she met her match
She better say those words or she won’t get past
Chorus
The simple words excuse me
Saved her on that day
Throwing in the word, please
That's all she needed to say
Please excuse me
Excuse me, please
Now everything is really OK
(Now I’ll let her live another day)
Outro
There were smiles when we walked away
And I hope the memory will stay
And next time she'll remember to say
Please excuse me
Excuse me, please
Simple words bring victories
Original Version
V1
I was at the store the other day
Just looking at clothes on the rack
A young gal pushed, get out of my way
She was ready to attack
V2
With a few words, I'd have stepped aside
I wasn't looking for a fight
But I stood my ground and kept my pride
She needed to do what was right
Pre-chorus
She stared at me and I stared back
A lesson in manners was where it was at
Chorus
The simple words excuse me
Would have gone a long way
She could have thrown in a little please
That's all she needed to say
Please excuse me
Excuse me, please
Either would have been OK
V3
Maybe no one ever taught her
That she didn't need to be so rude
You catch more flies with honey for sure
She softened her attitude
Pre-chorus
With one look she knew she met her match
Without those words, she wouldn't get past
Chorus
The simple words excuse me
Sure took her a long way
Thrown' in the word please
That's all she needed to say
Please excuse me
Excuse me, please
Either really was OK
Outro
There were no smiles when we walked away
But I hope the memory will stay
And next time she'll remember to say
Please excuse me
Excuse me, please
Simple words bring victories
Spoke word:
Please excuse me miss
Oh excuse me
See that's all we needed to say
Excuse me